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PostSubject: Renji's Birthday   Fri Aug 26, 2011 3:22 pm

When this was on BF, it was very popular. If you Google searched "renji's birthday", it would be the first thing to come up.
Well, I moved it to dA.
Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6
Chapter 7

I'm still writing. And if you don't like it, don't bitch about it. Read my comments at the bottom and they might answer any questions you may have. It's just supposed to be a humorous story, that's all.
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PostSubject: Re: Renji's Birthday   Fri Aug 26, 2011 11:11 pm

We wouldn't bitch if your writing wasn't absolutely atrocious.

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PostSubject: Re: Renji's Birthday   Sat Aug 27, 2011 5:46 am

You didn't bitch about the Syke thing. And maybe you should give me some advice that's not shitty advice, instead of just bitching?
Also, if so many people have like it(not just here but on other sites, besides BF and dA), it must be decent, at least.
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PostSubject: Re: Renji's Birthday   Sat Aug 27, 2011 8:16 am

KF's a good writer, so stop bitching.
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PostSubject: Re: Renji's Birthday   Sat Aug 27, 2011 8:36 am

Working on Chapter 8.
Special thanks to Loki for sumthin' in Ch.7, and to Harley for ideas concerning Ch.8.
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PostSubject: Re: Renji's Birthday   Sat Aug 27, 2011 3:01 pm

So much wrong here...

1. It was still awful.
2. There's so much wrong that it goes beyond all help.
3. I refuted the BM Argument of Story Quality many times already.
4. No she is not.

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PostSubject: Re: Renji's Birthday   Sat Aug 27, 2011 8:09 pm

I'm pretty sure you're one of the only people who say it's awful. I've had professionals read some of my work, not this fanfic, but the first few chapters of the Syke thing and some of my dearly departed work. They certainly didn't think it was awful. And they did not think it was amazing either, but it was good, according to them.
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PostSubject: Re: Renji's Birthday   Sat Aug 27, 2011 9:53 pm

If it's anything like that BM thing, they think it's bad, & you're not very good at determining when someone is lying to you. Hell, you ripped off one of the jokes from me, & it still made no sense.

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PostSubject: Re: Renji's Birthday   Sun Aug 28, 2011 10:37 am

I thought someone like you would know about my skill when it came to telling if someone is lying to me or not, but I guess it's something that people who know me in person would know more about.
And I don't know what BM thing you are talking about.
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PostSubject: Re: Renji's Birthday   Sun Aug 28, 2011 10:40 am

That godawful story you wrote with BM in it.

ITT: Informed Ability.

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PostSubject: Re: Renji's Birthday   Wed Aug 31, 2011 5:43 am

Neo, seriously, did you never develop people skills at any point in your life? Not even a little?

When someone tries, it doesn't matter how bad you think it is, you shouldn't just shoot them down in such a dickish way.
At least be useful and contribute something (like a proper criticism) rather than just being an arse all over the place.
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PostSubject: Re: Renji's Birthday   Wed Aug 31, 2011 10:22 am

My contribution is that she clearly is not a good writer.

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PostSubject: Re: Renji's Birthday   Wed Aug 31, 2011 3:39 pm

Your stuff is very good. Not awesome, but really good.
I know you're better than me, Neo. I accept that fact. And you also have more experience than me. And English is not my first language, so I think I'm a good writer, and others do, too. I'm not amazing, hell, I'm not as good as you, even. But I'm not a terrible writer.
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PostSubject: Re: Renji's Birthday   Wed Aug 31, 2011 7:54 pm

kisukeFan_4337 wrote:
English is not my first language

When I joined this forum, back when I thought they were nice people (because they were. Relatively speaking.), I kept apologizing about my English and they said I shouldn't worry because it was fine. Now I can't make a mistake without Harley being an ass about it. True story. o.o
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PostSubject: Re: Renji's Birthday   Wed Aug 31, 2011 7:58 pm

It could be worse. You could be Paul.
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PostSubject: Re: Renji's Birthday   Thu Sep 01, 2011 3:05 am

HarleyThomas wrote:
It could be worse. You could be Paul.

Yes, that would be...*shudder*...I don't want to talk about it...

@Tae: My first language is a European language.
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PostSubject: Re: Renji's Birthday   Thu Sep 01, 2011 7:16 am

So is mine?

@Harley: I wish that wasn't as good a point as it is.
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PostSubject: Re: Renji's Birthday   Thu Sep 01, 2011 10:23 am

It is.
^That goes for both statements.

You have nice eyes.
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